Hitman by Fechete Paul-Cristian - Comedy - Two step brothers start their hitmen career in the worse possible moment and soon find out that killing a man is no walk in the park. - pdf, format 8)

This is good. I'd say 4/5.

Could you post it in some other format instead of PDF

Thanks. By the story it looks good.

I think it was pretty good, but there are a few mistakes. Like on page 2, you had:

                                 MiKE (V.O.) (CONT'D)
                     Is this is it?...

Shouldn't it be, 'Is this it?'

Also on page 7 you had:

...Two huge TWIN GUYS, black suits, black glasses also, get off from the Cadillac...

It should be, ''...get out of...'

I'm too lazy to read on, so that ends my criticism.

I don't think this guy is anywhere in site anyway.  Dom just revived an old thread.

Well, this is quite a surprise :). I posted this script here a while ago and I just couldn't remember where I put it. Thank you for reading it, and thank you for your opinions. To tell you something about it, this is the first draft. I wrote it based on some ideas I had while I was under alcohol altered state of mind. I wrote two more drafts meanwhile, I'm still working on the last one, that is very different from what I posted here. I'll put it here too, once I finish it. Thank you again.