Mabon by Dale Murray - Horror - In the small village of Shieldhill, a coven of teenage witches decide to get back at a bunch popular teenagers who make their school life a living hell by cursing a boy to kill "All who have wronged" but it goes horrible wrong. - rtf, format 8)

Thanks very much, I have actually editied Mabon very much since I submited it because I sent it to a few people and they said basically the same thing, I started off with a small number of Characters but then ive started adding more and more and then had no time to develop them. Thank you very much for your advice.

Also, In my version of Mabon the format is All actions Left, All Dialog is in the center and there are like Cut To: On the right, however when I read it there I see that it is not the same. I do not know how that happened :S

If you go here:
http://www.freewebs.com/mabonscript/mabon.rtf
To get the script for the moment is an updated version of the script + The Formatting seems to be okay. I hope it is okay to do this if not I will remove this link.

Hm.. i quite enjoyed your story it had its twists and turns and some unpridictable moments like the window moment wich i really found quite good.
I didnt like the way keiron died tho worst bit of the story. Ending was quite confusing but arent all endings?
Yeh enjoyed it id give it a 8/10

Thank you very much keiron, Mabon has been majorly updated and over 80 pages now but for somereason the format is still mucked up I believe when it comes on this site - Must be the type of file I save it as.