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Posted by: Don, January 2nd, 2006, 10:01am
Special by Brett Harrison - Drama, Comedy - In the late 70's JEFF CUTLER, a bright but mixed up kid from upstate PA, has a nervous breakdown and is committed to a mental hospital. After noticing Jeff's penchant for making the other patients(and most of the staff) laugh in group therapy, his doctor suggests he try his hand at standup comedy. It is through his comedy that Jeff ultimately finds a path to mental health and to a future.  - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: Marshall Turner, January 5th, 2006, 11:43am; Reply: 1
Okay, it's an okay script, but you really need to add some white space. Readers hate it when the actions/describtions are bunched up into huge paragraph.
Posted by: rymatt, June 10th, 2006, 8:35pm; Reply: 2
I had a great time reading this script and I am realing hoping to see a follow-up.
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