Tooting Broadway Flatmates by Jason Young - Short - In this part of the world where the lives of low-income families and the unemployed go unrecorded and out of visibility, David Larlee exists on the fringes of society as a temp. His world is penetrated by the arrival of a new flatmate by the name of Susan Colman who has fallen from financial grace. At first there are rough edges in their relationship that leads to rhetorical jousting, but once they begin to embrace their differences and dependency on each other, they become equals. 11 pages. - doc, format 8)

Wow-this rewrite is great! I love it-if I lived in England I'd shoot it.