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Posted by: Don, May 31st, 2006, 9:02pm
New Beginnings by Del Wong - Short - Be careful of where you sleep! 1 page - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: Zombie Sean, May 31st, 2006, 10:50pm; Reply: 1
Ha-ha-ha, Del, such a cheesy ending for a 1 pager. But it was too short to actually understand what had happened. Maybe you should stretch it out, explain what had happened, give it a little backstory or something.

Sean
Posted by: James Fields, May 31st, 2006, 11:15pm; Reply: 2
Haha, this is a funny short Del. I liked it. Not much to review though. All I can say is that it was funny.

:)
Posted by: Shelton, May 31st, 2006, 11:29pm; Reply: 3
Isn't New Beginnings that new feminine hygiene spray?

Seriously, this is just a nice piece of irony.  
Posted by: James Fields, May 31st, 2006, 11:29pm; Reply: 4

Quoted from Shelton
Isn't New Beginnings that new feminine hygiene spray?

Seriously, this is just a nice piece of irony.  


Well put.

Posted by: del, June 1st, 2006, 12:18am; Reply: 5
Believe it or not, there is a Stakewood, Texas.


//del//
Posted by: spencerforhire, June 10th, 2006, 1:25pm; Reply: 6
I just have to say HMMMMM!!!
Posted by: Charming Man, January 26th, 2012, 8:28am; Reply: 7
One page. Is that all? Ain't gonna try harder?
Well i have one thing to say to you. If your not gonna put the effort in then give up in this field of work. Takes years of hard work to succeed ( I made it frst time due to my innate ability of telling a story ) and if you're gonna continue to write one pagers then stop right there thank you very much
Posted by: Grandma Bear, January 26th, 2012, 9:01am; Reply: 8
Just wanted to let you know that there are actual competitions out there for one page scripts. You might not like them, but they serve a purpose.
Posted by: CindyLKeller, January 26th, 2012, 10:41am; Reply: 9
After I saw that it was only one page, I had to check it out.

Haha, you found a new way to kill vampires, well, modern day vampires that is.

Why not write a feature modern day vampire script? Where humans have come to know all of the ways to hunt and kill vampires.

I'm sure with your imagination you'll be able to come up with a decent story.  ;D

Keep writing.

Cindy

Posted by: dogglebe (Guest), January 26th, 2012, 10:50am; Reply: 10
No one's looked at this script in over five years and the author's name doesn't ring a bell.  Why pick this one out to read?



Quoted from Charming Man
( I made it frst time due to my innate ability of telling a story )


This is probably your best story yet...


Phil

Posted by: CindyLKeller, January 26th, 2012, 11:28am; Reply: 11

Quoted from dogglebe
No one's looked at this script in over five years and the author's name doesn't ring a bell.  Why pick this one out to read?



Well for me, I saw it on the top of the portal. I didn't even notice the date.

But hey, Charming Man, do you have a script posted here that we could check out. I mean because you said you were able to make it your first time because of your ability to tell a story. I'd like to see how you did it.

Cindy
Posted by: mmmarnie, January 26th, 2012, 11:43am; Reply: 12

Quoted from Charming Man
One page. Is that all? Ain't gonna try harder?
Well i have one thing to say to you. If your not gonna put the effort in then give up in this field of work. Takes years of hard work to succeed ( I made it frst time due to my innate ability of telling a story ) and if you're gonna continue to write one pagers then stop right there thank you very much


@Charming Man...Unless you show some of your work and let us see that you may actually know what you're talking about, albeit harsh, people will just assume you're a troll.  Here to cause trouble, not help.  Let us see if you have the goods.  My guess is you're full of C R A P.  


Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), January 26th, 2012, 11:48am; Reply: 13
This Charming Man is great...a real charmer for sure.  I love how you pick up a 6 year old script, in which the writer has a total of 5 posts...and a 1 pager to top it all off.

Charming, ho are you picking your scripts that you so eloquently comment on?  What's your secret?  You're doing a Hell of job, buddy.  Keep it up.
Posted by: albinopenguin, January 26th, 2012, 1:44pm; Reply: 14
How does a published screenwriter not know the difference between "your" and "you're." I smell a troll...
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