Venom by Darren Higham - Sci Fi - Based on the Marvel Character of the same name. Venom becomes an unseen protector of the innocent, punsihing the guilty in hos own lethal way. But when he face up against the serial killer Cletus Kasady something goes wrong and soon he must battle against his greatest foe...Carnage  83 pages - rtf, format 8)

I'll give this a full read when I have time, but from what I've seen thus far, you've left out a lot of important capitalization (like first appearance of characters, etc) and the structure of certain transitions is clunky.

However, i will give you points for writing a Venom-centric script, like the one that David Goyer was supposed to write (or might've written) that never got produced.

More comments later.

Yeah I'll fix those problems and resubmit it.

But seeing as this was done purely for fun it is the story I am more interested in.

Daren, if you are here, I just want you to know that I'm reading this.  I have a lot going on so I'm only getting to read 10 pages here and 10 pages there.  But I'm making notes as I go along so I hope to give you somewhat of an indepth review when I'm done.

Jonathan.

Wow. Uh. I had no idea what this email was from. Had to re-read this thread. So that's cool - you replied to an 11 year old thread.  :D

Hahaha, yeah, I didn't realize how old it was.

Be interesting to compare it to the Tom Hardy version.

Is the Tom Hardy version available?  I'll check it out.