Pileup by NIcholas Bond  - Short, Horror, Thriller - A man is shot and left for dead in a dark alley. In dying, for his mind to be able to shut down he must first come to terms with his impending death.    25 pages - doc, format 8)

Hi Nicholas, I started to read you script, but unfortunatly I stoped because it is so dificult to follow. Do you know why you script is not being read yet? Because lot of things:

You have to take off the camera direction and separeted the paragraphs. It is too long and makes us so boring reading them.

Take as example of  right formated script from other writers here on SS. After that post you piece back on the thread, please .