Diablo Numero Uno by Jordan Baker - Action - The first in the 'Diablo' trilogy that follows Gino 'Diablo' Violente in his quest for revenge against his former master and friends. He calls on the help of his brother Topher and six other trustworthy companions in order to bring down the badness in the world. It's an action epic with a vast ensemble of characters, and more to come in Dos and Treis. 87 pages - doc, format 8)


Diablo Numero Dos by Jordan Baker - Action - The second and middle part of the 'Diablo' trilogy. This continues what was started in Numero Uno with Gino Violente and his ensemble of assassins. This next part introduces the new assassin team, Hook 'n GoGo and the badass FBI agent Nordaj Rabek. In this one the guys are off on their own doing their own things taking out the people on their own personal lists. Stay tuned for Numero Treis. 99 pages - html, format 8)

I'm reading number one now, But I think you didn't do a spelling check because there is a lot of typos and spelling errors, but I'm liking it so far.

Thanks for taking the time to read it. As far as spelling I checked it and in word it says there's a lot but most of it is slang that is intended anyway that word just doesn't pick up. Otherwise I think there's very few.

I finished number 1 and thought it was really good, I will read number 2 this weekend and tell about both of them. Keep it up, and also, welcome to simply scripts.

Thanks for checking it out and glad you liked it. Hopefully it gets better with the second one. Enjoy it.

I read number 2, it was not as better as number one, but it was still good, and had great dialouge and sequences, keep it up, and if you'll like, u could read my AVP script

http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-Scifi/m-1150638815/

Thanks for checking these two out. If there's anything else you'd like to say about either of them it would be much appreciated.

And I'll check your script out soon and tell ya what I think.

Thanks.