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Posted by: Don, February 3rd, 2007, 8:18am
Swap Race by Wichnider Guuillaume (perry1) - Comedy - When Marcus Brown attempts to steal from millionaire tycoon, Rich Banks; they both find themselves in a very interesting dilemma where they are awaken as each other. Now Brown gets a taste at a life where the American Dream he’s been searching for isn’t what he quite expected and Banks finally gets a lesson at a life where the American dream that he’s so used to having contains no such thing as hand-outs or choices. Living a lavish upper-class lifestyle and coping with the hardships of the lower-class, Brown and Banks must cope with the change and understand what each of them go through on a daily basis before they can change back. 118 pages - rtf, format 8)
Posted by: Ike, February 3rd, 2007, 1:52pm; Reply: 1
Hey man,

I jut gotta say that the synopsis is too long. Sorry I don't have mroe to say.

IkE
Posted by: patrickjasonrodriguez, February 7th, 2007, 6:08pm; Reply: 2
The formatting is a little tricky to get around. I don't know which program you used to write this, but I would suggest retyping the script to fit a more conventional form. Also, and this is entirely a personal peeve of mine, there are too many ethnic stereotypes. Then again, most mainstream films today have ethnic stereotypes. As for using script terminology such as "opening credits", try to refrain from doing so with future scripts; those actions are soley at the command of the director, not the writer, unless of course the director is the writer. I hope that last point didn't come across as anal. I'm just adapting to convention, I suppose.    
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