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Posted by: Don, March 3rd, 2007, 7:10pm
Coffee Cup by Leon Walker - Short, Comedy - Alan has created a pretty mundane world for himself. Office work, TV dinners, solitude. Then there's Katy, an overzealous, pc-minded co-worker. She considers a poster hanging in his office extremely offensive and crafts a scheme of extreme measure for its removal, rocking Alan's world for sure. 12 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: Takeshi (Guest), March 12th, 2007, 7:46pm; Reply: 1
Hey Leon,

I enjoyed this one. I thought squeezing the sexual harassment story in with the coffee cup story, in just 13 pages was a great effort. I thought the dialogue was amusing and the format was fine. The twist at the end was also funny and unpredictable. This would make a great short film and could be done on a pretty low budget. There were a couple of typos you need to fix, but apart from that everything was spot on.

Good effort.  
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