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Posted by: Don, April 8th, 2007, 10:31am
Drunken Prawn by David Wells - Comedy - In this dark comedy, a father struggles in coping with his 13-year-old daughter who mistakenly believes her dead mother was swallowed by a whale. 102 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: robin millen, November 10th, 2010, 2:53am; Reply: 1
pg 18. dophins

pg 20. all look at each with blank expressions.

I didn't read much further. I've seen people make comments about breaking up big chunks of action. I donno whats proper but you might want to check that out.
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