I'm an American writer but am a refugee from a European fiction writer's group that was disbanded by the site hosting it.

I have about ten feature length scripts currently in progress that could be considered 'high concept' and am very willing to critique other people's work. I just finished a coming of age piece called 'Crocodile Tears' and am working on a unique take on the zombie genre with "Easter Summer."

I will warn you that if you have a weak or fragile ego do not request a critique from me. I am extremely brutal but very dedicated to the craft, meaning = I will help you pound the scabby flesh from your script, siphon away the dross, and end up with a crafted story.

I am serious about getting better with my own work and appreciate all constructive criticism.

I will begin posting my stories shortly.  

Sounds good! :-)

Welcome to the site.

Pia

Quoted from electricsatori I have about ten feature length scripts currently in progress that could be considered 'high concept' and am very willing to critique other people's work.

Your working on ten featureas all at once!?! Don't overwhelm yourself! :) Anyways, welcome to the community! The more you read, the more your stuff will get read!

~Zack~

Quoted from electricsatori I will warn you that if you have a weak or fragile ego do not request a critique from me. I am extremely brutal but very dedicated to the craft, meaning = I will help you pound the scabby flesh from your script, siphon away the dross, and end up with a crafted story.

There's a couple of people here like that.  Be warned.


Phil

Hey, Electric welcome and when you read one of my 48 short scripts be gentle and don't put your reviews so hard, okay!  ;-)

The general rule is, if you're going to provide negative feedback, provide examples for it to back your statement.


Phil

Quoted Text The general rule is, if you're going to provide negative feedback, provide examples for it to back your statement.

I only give what I want to receive. Which is concise criticism aimed at refining and developing the story. If someone does not want to improve their craft I will not critique their work. Trust me, I understand the fragile egos most of us 'artist types' have.

I can't believe how active and friendly the members here are though. I am very happy that I decided to join this site.

Okay, Electric, show to them how "bad" you are, dude, reviewing my KOWABUNGA! posted in SHORTS. I'll suport that jump... Will I?!

Quoted from electricsatori I can't believe how active and friendly the members here are though. I am very happy that I decided to join this site.

Well, we're happy to have you here. ;D

The other general rule is

Give me any negative feedback and get your ass whupped

only joking, I want any and all kinds of crits people want to give me, good or bad.


Oh and welcome to the site. 10 scripts does seem a bit much tho.  I like to aim for a more reasonable number...9

Quoted Text Okay, Electric, show to them how "bad" you are, dude, reviewing my KOWABUNGA! posted in SHORTS. I'll suport that jump... Will I?!

Uh, I cannot find the script. I even looked through all your scripts.
I'd definitely critique it for you though. I can't promise it would be 'bad' but I promise you'll at least cry yourself to sleep tonight.

Here's a link to Helio's script.

http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-short/m-1180909013/

Also, make sure to keep an eye on your private messages! I was a member for more than a month before I realized that I had a private message inbox!  :P

Quoted from electricsatori I can't believe how active and friendly the members here are though. I am very happy that I decided to join this site.

When the time comes, we will feast on your flesh and drink the essence that is your soul.  The banshees will sing along with your screams....

Just kidding, of course.  There are no banshees.


Phil

Zack, thanx for the link to Helio's script. He is probably weeping right now reading my critique.

Nah, he's normally willing to accept any feed back. Good or bad.There are a lot of us like that here.

Hi Electricsatori,

Welcome!
I've been on here six weeks and it is addictive.

Will look forward to reading some of your feature scripts.
I am not much of a short story reader.
Cheers,
Elis

Quoted from electricsatori I will warn you that if you have a weak or fragile ego do not request a critique from me. I am extremely brutal but very dedicated to the craft, meaning = I will help you pound the scabby flesh from your script, siphon away the dross, and end up with a crafted story.

good. we need more people like you on this site. instead of the mercs who make nebulous comments in hopes for reads.

review my scripts anytime.

Right on Swapjack, I'll be happy to critique anything you got bud.
Ooh, I see you have links to your work. I just finished a monster critique for Zack but I will check yours out next.

Which one do you want a crit on?

You're also welcome to review my scripts anytime you feel like...and also feel free to be brutally honest about anything and everything.

You got it pumpkinhead. Give me a script you are serious about and I'll do it.

okay.  Your choice you can either do this short

Stalkers.

There are 2 scripts in this one, the first is Zacks and the second "Unseen" is mine.


or you can do this one (feature length)

Jason versus Pumpkinhead

For this one I am aware of a few errors that I need to fix but anything else you might notice that have skipped mine (and other peoples attention) would be appreciated.

But as I said it is your choice which one you do.

Zack asked me to do Stalkers and I critiqued his first half. That's great that you guys teamed up for this!
Since I've already done Zack's half of Stalkers I will do yours next.

I need to finish the second act of a script I'm working on right now (Easter Summer). I have to finish the 2nd act before it goes stale in my head.
If you check out the Stalkers' thread you will see my critique on his half. I will give yours the same attention to detail.

Don't worry about it, you can do it in your own time, it's not like it's going anywhere :D

Finish up what you need to do and then you can review mine