The Poet by Claudio Cicchini - Short, Action - A bunch of young punks attempt to make a name for themselves by trying to take out the legendary hitman known as the Poet. Needless to say, things don't go according to plan. (Short - 9 pages) - pdf, format 8)

Claudio,

   Another interesting gangster scene.  It definately had concepts that I liked about it, but a couple of parts might have went way over the top.  (I wouldn't have been as patient as Belzer was, I would have shot Poet right away just on the mere principal of his annoying rhymes.)

   It was still interesting, though, and like the last thing I read of yours, has a lot of promise with a couple of rewrites.

   I'm still interested in reading about the family, so be sure to let me know if you have anything else with them coming out soon.

  -  Mark