The Devil's Due by Kenneth Dyson - Short, Drama -  A young man enters a funeral home where he meets his late friend's father.  The two talk, and it ends in a way you would never expect. 4 pages - pdf, format 8)

This is a nice idea, but, and I know this is a short, it needs more build.  The Don seems a liitle too open to allowing someone into his private viewing, no matter what the guy said.  It seemed a little too quick and pat.  It's only 4 pages, adding a little meat to the skeleton will bring out the characters and give the end a little more zing.