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Posted by: Don, July 26th, 2007, 11:00pm

Golf Wisdom by Rion Martell - Short - Grandpa shows his son and grandson how to play golf. 6 pages - pdf, format 8)

Posted by: Takeshi (Guest), July 27th, 2007, 5:51am; Reply: 1

This was a nice light read, Rion. The dialogue was fairly amusing, as was the ending. I’ve no changes to suggest.

There were a couple of typos:

You wrote your a couple of times when it should have been you’re.

P2: Mr Ben: Dad, I golf just fine, so let’s just enjoy are day etc

It should have been: Dad, I play golf just fine, so let’s just enjoy our day etc

Posted by: sniper, July 28th, 2007, 6:06am; Reply: 2

Actually I think the term "I golf" is correct.

Posted by: Takeshi (Guest), July 28th, 2007, 9:32pm; Reply: 3

Quoted from sniper
Actually I think the term "I golf" is correct.

Yeah, I wasn't sure about that, but I thought I'd bring it up just in case.

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