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Posted by: Don, August 13th, 2007, 8:17am
Oedipus by George Galanakis - Drama, Historical - Oedipus is a sprawling epic adapted from the ancient Greek plays by Sophocles and Euripides that traces the story of Oedipus throughout the saga of his condemnation, punishment and finally his deliverance, for the horrible crimes of killing his father and marrying his mother. 100 - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: ABennettWriter, August 13th, 2007, 10:11am; Reply: 1
Let me preface by saying that I love the Oedipus trilogy. I'm excited to read this! I hope I can finish it today.
Posted by: ABennettWriter, August 13th, 2007, 10:16am; Reply: 2
I'm still on the beginning, but you've got a few errors in your character descriptions. You say that Creon is a middle aged man in his early 40s. Stick with his ages, since "middle aged" is too vague. Saying both is redundant.

But it's good so far.

Your montages aren't really montages. I think it'd be best to leave them as separate paragraphs/shots. Just remove all the numbers and "Montage".
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