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Posted by: Don, August 26th, 2007, 10:13am
August '07 One Week Challenge

Thanks to everyone to participated in the One Week Challenge this month.  The OWC isn't a contest, however  recognize that as writers, it helps to fill out your CV if you have a contest wins or even are selected as a finalist.  Since there were 40 entries and only 35 made it to the challenge, all 35 posted scripts are considered finalist.  I asked each of the participants to read three scripts and select the one script they enjoyed the most.  Those scripts are listed as "Writer's choice".  Three scripts were selected as "Webmaster's Choice" and one script was selected as "iScript Selectee".  

Thanks everyone for participating.  I truly enjoyed reading each and every script submitted.

With that being said, Listen to Sean Elwood's (Zombie Sean) Bull Creek.

Note: the audio recording is released under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivitives3.0 license.  In English that means, you can share it with whomever you wish.  You can't charge for it and you can't change it.  


- Don

The iScript.com selectee

Bull Creek by Sean Elwood (thedeadwalk2nite)  (OWC name - Menolly)  - Short, Thriller - Four teenagers are stranded on an old houseboat while being hunted by one of the world's most dangerous underwater predators. - Listen to the iScript August '07 One Week Challenge finalist, webmaster's choice, iScript.com's choice. - pdf, format 8)

Webmaster's choice

Cobra Blood Cocktail by Breanne Holifield ()  (OWC name - Joel Lilienkamp)  - Short, Thriller - Three people: a detective, a bank robber, and a girlfriend. One of them is the mysterious assassin known as The Cobra. A rival assassin holds them all captive while he tries to deduce which one. August '07 One Week Challenge finalist, webmaster's choice. - pdf, format 8)

Diplopia by Seth Hamilton (seth)  (OWC name - Shonagar)  - Short, Thriller - A young Cajun boy, cursed with supernatural powers, must make a decision. One that might blind him to the reality that is around him. August '07 One Week Challenge finalist, webmaster's choice. - pdf, format 8)

Writer's Choice

Bugman by Yves Vrancken (movemycheese)  (OWC name - Mirrim)  - Short, Thriller - There is a reason our parents told us that being nosy is bad. August '07 One Week Challenge writer's choice selectee. - pdf, format 8)

Light Mist Forming by Antonio Gangemi (Tony G)  (OWC name - Jaxom)  - Short, Thriller - A teenage girl rises from her watery grave to act out her revenge. August '07 One Week Challenge writer's choice selectee. - pdf, format 8)

Little Old Joe by Zack Akers (Zack Akers)  (OWC name - Anise Fargoe)  - Short, Thriller -  When Eli wakes up in an old house boat, he confronts the boats owner (Joe) hoping to learn where he is and why he's there. However, lttle old Joe knows more than he's saying. August '07 One Week Challenge writer's choice selectee. - pdf, format 8)

The River Is Her Home by Michael Cornetto (mcornetto)  (OWC name - Sallah Telgar)  - Short, Thriller - When a man and his son fall under the spell of a mysterious, beautiful river dweller, they find love is a deadly game. August '07 One Week Challenge writer's choice selectee. - pdf, format 8)

To Die For by Bryan Mora (chomico)  (OWC name - Robinton)  - Short, Thriller - A sexual betrayal brings together a couple from the suburbs, and a critically psychotic woman… who’d do anything to get what she wanted ...ANYTHING. August '07 One Week Challenge writer's choice selectee. - doc, format 8)

Cold Call by Mike Shelton ()  (OWC name - Torene Ostrovsky)  - Short, Thriller - During a routine call, a telemarketer overhears a woman's screams and decides to investigate. As he gets further into his search, he finds that the woman he thinks he heard has been missing for six months. August '07 One Week Challenge writer's choice selectee. - pdf, format 8)

All the finalist can be found here:
http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-OWC0807/m-1186357863/
and
http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-OWC0807/m-1186357925/
Posted by: chism, August 26th, 2007, 11:00am; Reply: 1
Yes, congrats to everyone. Good work all round.


Matt.
Posted by: chism, August 26th, 2007, 11:16am; Reply: 2
Just finished the iScript myself. I was impressed with a lot of it, pretty cool. Special congrats to you, Sean.


Matt.
Posted by: bert, August 26th, 2007, 11:17am; Reply: 3
Hey, congrats to Sean!  Way to go.

As one of the few who actually had a quick peek at "Scary Movie 5" -- but could not bring myself to comment haha -- it is great to see you maturing as a writer.

Best of luck with future projects.
Posted by: Zack, August 26th, 2007, 11:30am; Reply: 4
Congrats Sean! It's kinda cool to see that my script made the 'Writers Choice' list. It makes me feel good.

~Zack~
Posted by: tomson (Guest), August 26th, 2007, 11:30am; Reply: 5
Congratulations Sean.

I really liked it.

Maybe you should write more zombieless scripts. ;-)
Posted by: Sandra Elstree., August 26th, 2007, 12:00pm; Reply: 6
Congratulations Sean!

And congratulations to everyone who completed the challenge.

I definitely saw some names mentioned here that I thought did extremely well, but you can only have one winner.

I need to go back and read "Bull Creek" again and listen to it on iscript, but what I remember that I think is really good, is the concept of alligators (or was is a crocodile) being where you don't expect them; this special breed.

People have spoken on the boards about cliches and we all know how it can be a real challenge pulling out fresh material even when we're using "tried and true" devices.  Without even going back and looking at "Bull Creek" or some of the other scripts which resonated more for me personally, I'd have to say that besides all of the subtle energies that go into a memorable script, the germ which sets it apart is that bit of difference from what's been done before.

Anyways Sean, I hope you celebrate and treat yourself to something.

Sandra
Posted by: Death Monkey, August 26th, 2007, 12:38pm; Reply: 7
Congrats there Sean.

I guess Bull Creek is next on my to-read list. I really loved the description in the IScript reading. If I wrote like that when I was your age, I'd be writing Citizen Kane 2 by now.

There's an idea. Citizen Kane 2: Apocalypse!

Congratulations to everyone else as well.
Posted by: Tony Gangemi, August 26th, 2007, 1:00pm; Reply: 8
Congratulations, Sean!  Great script. :)
Posted by: Zombie Sean, August 26th, 2007, 1:11pm; Reply: 9
Thanks everyone. And apart from the clichés, unoriginalism, and lack of zombies, I'm glad yous guys enjoyed it. Oh, and Bert, Scary Movie 5...Well, let's just say that I'm afraid to go back and look at the thread...or the script itself. And Pia, I don't know if I can stray away from zombie scripts. I love them too much, as weird as that sounds...;D


And I want to say congratulations to the Webmaster's Choice and the Writer's Choice and to everyone else! This OWC was fun and I enjoyed reading the scripts and writing my own.

Sean
Posted by: Seth, August 26th, 2007, 1:53pm; Reply: 10
Sean,

Congrats!
Posted by: sniper, August 26th, 2007, 2:02pm; Reply: 11
Congrats y'all.
Posted by: dogglebe (Guest), August 26th, 2007, 2:04pm; Reply: 12
I fear that the next OWC, if it's horror, will have too many entries to manage.


Phil
Posted by: Mr.Ripley, August 26th, 2007, 2:13pm; Reply: 13
Congrats Sean and good luck with future projects. Congratulations are also in order for those nominated for webmaster's choice and and writer's choice.

Gabe
Posted by: Breanne Mattson, August 26th, 2007, 2:25pm; Reply: 14
Congratulations Sean! You did a great job. I liked Bull Creek when I first read it and I admit I was really surprised to find someone so young had written it. Terrific job and congratulations on the selection. You earned it!


Breanne

Posted by: ZiggyplayedGuitar, August 26th, 2007, 2:36pm; Reply: 15
Congrats Sean! Bullcreek wasn't my favourite of the bunch but you certainly have a talent for writing. Good luck on future works.
Posted by: ABennettWriter, August 26th, 2007, 3:16pm; Reply: 16
That's awesome!
Posted by: ReaperCreeper, August 26th, 2007, 3:30pm; Reply: 17
Wow. That's great! Sean, Congratulations man! ;D

And lesser congratulations to us all xD (kidding)

--Julio
Posted by: Shelton, August 26th, 2007, 6:45pm; Reply: 18
Congrats, Sean.  Looking forward to listening to the iScript version.


And additional congrats to Bert, who no longer has to claim he's a gynecologist to feel like a doctor.
Posted by: mcornetto (Guest), August 26th, 2007, 6:54pm; Reply: 19
Well done Sean!  Listened to the iScript version, sounded pretty good. I hadn't read the script earlier so it was fascinating to listen to as my first read.
Posted by: elis, August 26th, 2007, 7:07pm; Reply: 20
Well done Sean, Congratulations. Look forward to listening to iScript version.
Posted by: bert, August 26th, 2007, 7:56pm; Reply: 21

Quoted from tomson
This isn't really on topic, but since we're all congratulating each other here I thought this would be okay here. If not, then Bert, go ahead and delete it.


I won't delete it, but this is really Sean's little smile-thread, you know?  Let's keep it that way.

I appreciate the thoughts, but was trying to keep it kind of low-key.  I had no idea Don was going to do that, but I guess it's kind of cool, too.


Quoted from Mike
Bert...no longer has to claim he's a gynecologist to feel like a doctor.


Cold hands, warm heart -- isn't that what they say?

I toyed with changing my screen name to dr. bert, but it just looked too pretentious and I changed it right back.

And I had to laugh at dogglebe's comment that "Dr. Phil" was already taken  :)

Now go back to congratulating Sean.
Posted by: CindyLKeller, August 27th, 2007, 6:43am; Reply: 22
Congrats Sean!  ;D

I tried to listen to it, but it won't let me... Oh well.

Congrats again,

Cindy
Posted by: Blakkwolfe, August 27th, 2007, 8:35am; Reply: 23
Great Job, Sean! I enjoyed reading your script, and I look forward to checking out the Iscript verision as well.
Posted by: movemycheese, August 27th, 2007, 10:08am; Reply: 24
Congratulations, Sean!
Posted by: alffy, August 27th, 2007, 10:18am; Reply: 25
Well done Sean!  Nothing against the many newbies who entered but I'm glad a regular won.
Posted by: James McClung, August 27th, 2007, 6:17pm; Reply: 26
Congrats, Sean. The iScript sounds great. Just like a genuine book on tape. Bull Creek was a fun read and a fun listen.
Posted by: greg, August 27th, 2007, 6:54pm; Reply: 27
Way to go, o ya lyk rly lolz!  Your writing is very complete, plus you have good punctuation!  Good job!

This is definitely something you could put on a resume!  Congrats!
Posted by: BryMo, September 1st, 2007, 9:05pm; Reply: 28
Finaly i've been able to get my internet back and i missed the annoucements! Man! lol.

But wow congrats to you sean, I'm so excited to go off and listen to it now.
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