Daddy's Little Girl by Margaret  Avnet - Drama - A father takes a trip down memory lane as his daughter is set to walk down the aisle. 6 pages - pdf, format 8)

conflict will ceratinly add to this, i am sure you know what you want to do already, looked good nice flow, i wonder how it would have been if the little girl was in braces or maybe as a bride...as i said get some good ole conflict,   few subplots with your mechanics you will have very fine script i hope you post more soon...jim