Snafu by Joseph Vecsey & Tony Mercedes & Christian Murphy - Comedy -  An over the top comedy about a white, prejudice,  business man who’s forced to hibernate for thirty years to get away from facing charges comes out after all that time to find that the general population is all black.123 pages - pdf, format 8)

i read 51 pages and i liked it up to a point it really sounded like it was headed towards a racest sorta thing, i like the idea but way too much slang for race here on both sides written very good content was very good upto 51 or so i liked the idea as i said but i would eitther tone it down maybe change the direction a bit why black take over maybe its equal and his old ways conflict with that or use his time machine more i am just not comfortable with the black against white it would be a hard sell as is but your writing skills are very good imho