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Posted by: Don, October 28th, 2007, 2:20pm
Last Light by Lou Jones - Action - Attempts to expose a drug ring spark gang warfare in a Virginia mall. 126 pages - rtf, format 8)
Posted by: lawrence gilliam, November 7th, 2007, 3:05pm; Reply: 1
I started reading theres a lot of detail if you take some out it will bring your page numbers down also your scenes run together you should fade, cut, to make it more easy to understand where there going i,m going to read more and will get back to you.
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