Man of Steel - Print Topic

Posted by: Don, January 20th, 2008, 3:05pm

Man of Steel by Dan Marcus - Action - The story picks up directly after Superman Returns and continues the lives of Clark Kent, Lois Lane, Richard White, and Jason White, and the familial dynamic that now entails after the revelation that Jason is the heir to Superman. Their lives are completely altered forever with the emergence of The Eradicator, a being forged out of the remains of New Krypton, determined to continue the Krypton race and eliminate all inferior species, which includes all humanity on Earth. 122 pages - pdf, format 8)

Posted by: JohnPaul, July 10th, 2020, 12:33pm; Reply: 1

Hey, hows it going. I'm going to read your script. Wondered if we can do an exchange since I HAVE a superman script as well. Let me know.
https://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/SUPERMANYEARONEAMERICANALIEN.pdf

Posted by: Yuvraj, July 10th, 2020, 12:41pm; Reply: 2

Hey JohnPaul, not looking for any exchange at the moment but wanted to point out one thing.

You are missing a title page in the script. Do update your script ASAP.

Posted by: BarryJohn, July 11th, 2020, 6:43am; Reply: 3

Hi Dan.

That was a good three hour read. A very well written good "follow-on" Superman story. Just one little thing that "knarred" at me... Clark/Superman living in a flat in which he SLEEPS.

Posted by: AlsoBen, July 11th, 2020, 6:53am; Reply: 4

This is a twelve year old script everyone

Posted by: Pleb, July 11th, 2020, 2:45pm; Reply: 5

Haha I hope the writer hadn’t been sat by his computer waiting for feedback all that time

Posted by: BarryJohn, July 12th, 2020, 2:42am; Reply: 6

I know its 12 years old...

I grew up with the man in blue and red. It's just "wrong" to now give him a flat to live in. The writer, Dan, writes Clark laying in bed been grumpy, in keep hitting his bedside snooze button on his alarm clock. NO! You may just as well give him a police scanner and a cell phone...

--Spider mans an Arachnophobia - The Hulk suffers small man syndrome - Wonder woman and Cat Woman are bust in bed together.

As I'd said, A very well written story. Very visual writing = Seeing my Hero in bed asleep, I wanted to slit my wrists.

..It's just me.

Posted by: JohnPaul, August 4th, 2020, 2:32am; Reply: 7

Hi wondered if you would let me do a dramatic reading of your script and review for a fanfiction channel I'm doing on Youtube?

This is an example of what I'm talking about.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=viDHFcxiJNg