An Inner Darkness by Matthieu Rene McClintock - Action, Crime, Drama - After the suicide of his father, a young man grows up to be a ruthless criminal without conscience. After the lives of his family, friends and himself become endangered by the threat of death or an impending investigation by the DEA, Patrick Carter must make the decision of his life, one with potentially devistating consequences. 93 pages - pdf, format 8)

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I like the concept of the film.

The title should be called "THE DARKNESS WITHIN". Much better.

Carter know's there's a piano over his head, and his life may be over soon, but for me it didnt quite feel that way. You need to add some scenes with the FBI, CIA, DEA, or who ever wants to take him down. That would add some much needed suspense.

Completely agree. Thanks for reading.