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Posted by: Don, April 5th, 2008, 7:42am
Redlane by Joe Granby (mrg3000) - Thriller - Once she was paid to kill. Now she's paid to protect. Red is the transporter on a mission of revenge in this thriller. - fdr, format 8)
Posted by: Yosef91, April 9th, 2008, 5:11pm; Reply: 1
You may want to come up with a better logline.  I'm not kidding (or trying to be mean) when I say that I laughed out loud reading it.  Also, I'm not going to pick up a script looking for a car chase.  I'll give it a read, but I'm going in with a prejudice based on the logline.
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