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Posted by: Don, April 24th, 2008, 6:21pm
Out Last Flight Together by Devashree - Short - A Couple on a verge of a divorce gets stuck in snow- an ideal situation forced on them by destiny to resolve their differences. But when you see life as just one big fairy tale, you are often asked to make a choice between reality and fiction...which one would you choose to dwell in to end your story? 8 pages - doc, format 8)
Posted by: Pants, April 25th, 2008, 12:27pm; Reply: 1
I really did not care for this script. First, I'd lose the camera directions unless you plan on filming this yourself. They don't help witht he visualizations. The dialouge was very weak. I think you should name the characters instead if referring to them as man and woman. You mention the woman was having an affair with her boss. If she's an actress who was she banging? The director, producer? The whole movie scene was not very believable also.
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