Sunset Point - Pilot by Kevin (kevieee) - Series, Drama - A series following Curtis as he enters the Bryson families home in a place thats not all that sunny. 30 pages - pdf, format 8)

Hi Kevin, i just came across your drama and decided to give it a read. Now im new to this so im not sure how to give a review but for what it's worth i liked your script, i could see a clear visual of where you was trying to go with this idea.

Your characters seem good, Julia and kim clearly share a good friendship, although im still a little unsure on curtis's behalf we don't really get a look in to what type of character he is, but i guess we will get to know him more as the series continues.

I must admit im hopeing to read the second episode especially on the way the pilot ended! i was like oh no i want to read the next episode now!
Should be very interesting to see how Julia and Curtis's friendship blossoms.

There were a few spelling mistakes but they can be easily corrected once read over again.

But once again overal i really liked it, Good Job.

thanks for the read!
im glad i got you interested, i hope to have the second episode up as soon as possible! spelling mistakes, ah, i always try so hard to not have them but i guess they'll always slip past the radar ahah!