A Mirror With No Reflection is a collection of poems that I have written that I would like to look at getting published.

Here is one of the poems, please leave any message to tell me what you think of it.


THREE TYPES OF HURT

Three types of hurt,
But all the same pain,
Summers hottest day but I stand in the rain,

Daylight turns to darkness,
As bright turns to grey,
She’s like the blowing wind with nothing to say,

Gust after gust,
She’s knocking me down,
I can’t hear nothing I can’t hear a sound,

Eyes closed tight,
It’s always the same,
Three types of hurt but all the same pain.

Here is another one of the poems, please leave any message to tell me what you think of it.

PERSONALITY
  
Have you ever looked to see
At what makes a personality?
Those little things that don’t seem big
But everyday it’s the way you live

When you laugh at people’s stupid jokes
That really aren’t that funny
Buy everyone a little gift
When you have no money

Cry floods of tears like a little child
When a film is really sad
Or your face goes bright red
When you’re really mad

Spit out words that make no sense
When talking to someone you like
Or shake like a leaf and go real white
When someone gives you a fright

Whoever you are or whatever you do,
There are lots of things that make you, you
Just be yourself and you will see
What makes up your personality

"I can't hear nothing" is a double negative. That's wrong. Other than that, it's okay.