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Posted by: sniper, August 4th, 2008, 5:01pm
Pretentious Bullshit - Part Trois: I'm Thinking...maybe

Bending down to pick up the bloody pulp I once called my Heart, I'm thinking,
maybe this isn't the end,
maybe that car missed you
maybe I never buried you

Looking down in the empty bottle once filled with soothing smiles, I'm thinking,
maybe you won't be back
maybe you won't turn four
maybe what's been taken from me is forever gone

Staring at that beautiful chrome painkiller in my hand, I'm thinking,
maybe Kurt was right
maybe this .45 is the answer
maybe it will fit in my mouth

And then I look up at Jesus on his upside down cross and I'm thinking,
nah, it'll fit better in his

;)
Posted by: bert, August 4th, 2008, 6:37pm; Reply: 1
Um...wow, dude.  That is pretty down.

Potent, but down.

Fixed a typo that was hurting the piece.  Hope that's cool.
Posted by: sniper, August 5th, 2008, 1:33am; Reply: 2

Quoted from bert
Um...wow, dude.  That is pretty down.

Potent, but down.

Yeah, but it ends on a light note :)

And thanks for fixing the typo.


Quoted from Grandma Bear
Come with me on a journey down the Nine Circles of Hell instead.

And I'm thinking maybe that doesn't sound like a bad idea.
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