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Posted by: Don, September 7th, 2008, 4:23pm

8 Second Dance by William Finlay - Short, Comedy, Mockumentary - Bart Tyler is a famous Rodeo Champion. But, golly, he's tough on the animals. 5 pages - pdf, format 8)

Posted by: MPaige, September 18th, 2010, 4:58am; Reply: 1

Hilarious! Good job! Well written and perfectly visual. Nice!

Posted by: Craiger6, September 18th, 2010, 1:02pm; Reply: 2

Hi William,

This type of story isn't exactly my cup of tea, but given what you were trying to do, I thought it was a pretty good effort. I agree that there were some nice visuals. It's just, well, a little weird. Haha. But I guess that was sort of your point.

Not much else to add really. Best of luck.

Craig

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