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Posted by: Don, September 20th, 2008, 8:12am
Trailer Wars by David Nelson - Comedy - A dimwitted sewer worker joins forces with the redneck Mafia to win his girlfriend back. 93 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: dogglebe (Guest), September 20th, 2008, 9:14am; Reply: 1
David, you should consider rewriting your logline.  What you have, here, reads like the one scene of your script and not the summary of the entire script.


Phil
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