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Posted by: Don, November 4th, 2008, 5:42pm

Two Gold Rings by Teo Gonzalez - Short, Drama - Sometimes love is so much closer than expected. 5 pages - pdf, format 8)

Posted by: dogglebe (Guest), November 5th, 2008, 9:25am; Reply: 1

I actually had to read the ending a second time to be sure I got it. It seemed a little anti-climactic to me.

The story, itself, was well told. The visuals flowed nicely and the story was easy to understand for something without dialog.

Phil

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