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Posted by: Don, January 25th, 2009, 9:00am
Leo by Matthew Szewczyk - Short, Drama - A butcher's assistant in a small mid-western town keeps a secret which affects his boss and the woman he loves.  What could possibly go wrong?    30 pages - rtf, format 8)
Posted by: creepy, March 3rd, 2009, 3:26pm; Reply: 1
i really like this script a lot! very good story-the end can be done darkly.
Posted by: steven8, March 4th, 2009, 1:25am; Reply: 2
That was a good script.  he thought he had it all figured out, but like most things you try to manipulate, it comes back to bite you in the ass.

This reminds me of something that may have been on the old Steven Spielberg Amazing Stories show.

Even though you said it was one continuous shot, I think you should break up the action at the end.

Great job.  I'd love to see this produced.
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