My script, "The Plan" was made the other day! Very exciting. Here is the youtube link: http://au.youtube.com/watch?v=4pk5j88-dWo

There were lots of feedback on the thread with the script, http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-short/m-1231295404/ ... lots of people had constructive critismto add.

Unfortunately I didn't time to rewrite it, as I got an email from the makers AFTER they had made it. Hmmm. Anyway the video looks good I think. The audio and the acting could be better, but the music and other aspects of it I like.

Anyway what do you guys think? The makers want to make a web series with me.

Tom, I've just saw The Plan. I congratulate you t have a short script done, - better than me, actually.

It has a serious sound problem, unfortunatley.
I like of Sam Jenkins, I think this guy has future in the acting.

Who directed it? Who is Tom Pascal?

Thanks Helio. Which character did Sam Jenkins play? I don't even know who played who.

Sam and Ste, the two actors directed it. I, Tom Pascal wrote it.

Glad you liked it, thanks for the watch.

Quoted from Tommyp Sam and Ste, the two actors directed it. I, Tom Pascal wrote it.

One of them has a really good name haha.

I liked this Tommy. Well done for getting it made.

For two kids with a camera they did pretty well and if they're wanting to work with you that can only be a good thing.

Nice one

Ste

Congrats Tommy!

I thought it was pretty good. The sound was a little uneven and I wished it had been a little less "talking heads", but over all, well done!  :-)

Thanks Ste and Pia. I told them that if we made more it would have to look more professional. That's reasonable I think.

I'm basically a famous writer now. Anyone want an autograph?!

Quoted from Tommyp T I'm basically a famous writer now. Anyone want an autograph?!

Would you like mine?  ;-)

Only if it's on a large photo of you posing for a naked (not half naked, I'm talking like fully, off-the-show naked) photoshoot. :) Otherwise, na, I'll pass thanks. Wait till you are a bit more famous.

Quoted from Tommyp Only if it's on a large photo of you posing for a naked (not half naked, I'm talking like fully, off-the-show naked) photoshoot. :) Otherwise, na, I'll pass thanks. Wait till you are a bit more famous.

I have pics like that.

I realize you're a pro writer now, but do you really think Tommy wants those pics of you?



You can send them to me though if you like...

Quoted from Grandma Bear I realize you're a pro writer now, but do you really think Tommy wants those pics of you? You can send them to me though if you like...

Who said they were pics of me?   Yowza!

Damn, I'm sexy.

Congrats Tommy,

Always nice to see other writers here getting their work getting made.

JT.

Hey man,

As you know, I wasn't a great fan of the script, but for what the film was, it was pretty good man. Acting could have used a bt of work, but yeah, it was pretty good man.

Congrats on getting this made as well.

Take it easy fella'.

Thanks Jayrex and Toby. We are gonna make a short mini series. I'm writing it now. The film is more of a pilot...

Mike, have you done any acting before?  With a body like that, you should seriously look into it.

Congrats, Tom. Is the series going to be web-based so we can all watch it? Warn us if Mike is going to be in it less-than-covered, though. Even with the beard.

James

Yeah it will be on youtube and similar sites. I will post links as soon as they come out of course :)

Mike will only be naked in about 4 scenes. They are long ones though. Oh this is like a marketing ploy!

Everyone watch "The Plan" because Mike is naked in it!!!!

Quoted from Tommyp Everyone watch "The Plan" because Mike is naked in it!!!!

I think that sort of marketing is going to work against you. You maybe should say:

Everyone watch in order to NOT see Mike naked.

Might get you more hits.