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Posted by: Don, February 15th, 2009, 2:50pm
PSI by Andrew Lightfoot - Short - A lonely man and his unique ability, is it a curse or a gift? 7 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: Xavier, February 15th, 2009, 3:42pm; Reply: 1
Hey Andrew, I like the script.  It's okay.  The idea was good, all ideas are and your writing make for a quick read.  Although there are a lot of actions in this script, usually when I read a short I like to read lots of dialog mixed in with the right type of actions.

I'm not saying that it was bad, I'm not.  It was a nice little script, if you have any other scripts on this site, I'd love to read 'em.

Good Luck in the future,

Xavier ;D
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