The Green Hornet by Alan Clark (ozone4) - Action - Caught up in a world between justice and revenge, the Green Hornet and Kato ride again. 125 pages - pdf, format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

I have read about half of this from over on the script nurse forum, and I think it reads very smoothly.  The dialogue is crisp, and the action is very visual.  It is written by person who is a true fan of the Green Hornet, and it shows.

he and I have spoken, and discussed a few formatting issues, and he is going to work on character introductions, but overall, it is a vary solid piece of work.

Thank you steven8....I can be contacted at centurytw@att.net

Alan

Holy cow, man, you been in a coma (I'll check back in seven years and see if you lapsed)?

....:) Yea, things happend. Got devorced, started a business...work, work. I got pretty discouraged after the abomination that passed as a GH script got put on screen. Still writing though. I love it!

Loved the title and the logline so I started reading. Unfortunately  I'm not a big fan of shooting so I couldn't get over the initial pages. Actually, once I establish some interest in the characters, then I don't mind a bit of violence. The thugs and dead body just came to early... I may be back and try to read again.