Mother Funner "Tiffany's .98 Value Menu" by Kari Kluter - Comedy - After finding out that Allmart's indoor fast food restaurant has a new .99 Value Menu, Tiffany Fajita-Llama Dumme decides to open up a fast food restaurant, in her house, named Up chuck Checkers, that sells fast food for no more than .98. Tiffany does this, because Allmart can't be any more successful than they already are, and Allmart can't steal any more success from hard working people. 231 pages - pdf, format 8)

I skimmed through and the dialog was horrible, not real at all. Your main character comes off like a... I don't know but I just didn't like it. Also the length what's up with that?

What sort of drugs were you on when you wrote this?

I thought that Trojan was being rude with his comment but, after reading ten page of this script, I think that being stoned is a requirement for reading it.  Weirdness scores real high in this script, but humor and storystelling score real low.


Phil

This is one of the weirdest scripts I ever read. The first page made me laugh really loud, and I mean that in a good way. I haven't finished reading it yet, but I really am enjoying it. I have no clue why you have Men #1-6. Why can't they have names or at least be known as someone a little different? Other than that, this script is really enjoyable for me.

WTF????????????????????

WOW...simply...WOW!

231 pages?

OK< hold on, I'm only on my first drink of the night.  When (if) I get to # 11, I'll give this a look.

Maybe I should call an old stoner buddy of mine and catch a big buzz.  Yeah, that would help.  I'm on it.

Pass the doob, man!