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Posted by: Don, June 13th, 2009, 5:58pm
Bayou by Milan Antal - Action - Detroit base Labor Union hire hit shooters to take out JFK.New Orleans Italian Mafia working together with French Cajun Mafia. 89 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: The boy who could fly, June 26th, 2009, 10:53pm; Reply: 1
Is the writer of this around?  If so I have a few questions.  Page 25 is golden, but if the writer just dumped his or her script here then there is no point in going any further.
Posted by: Jesu_Christo (Guest), June 29th, 2009, 7:05pm; Reply: 2
The story made no sense to me. I had no idea what was going on. Was it supposed to be like that?
Posted by: wombat, July 14th, 2009, 12:04am; Reply: 3
"We see him speak in French"? "GLOF OF MEXICO"? How about running spell checker and using the proper script format? Oh, and a story that actually makes sense would help, too!
Posted by: Chongamon, August 1st, 2009, 9:43pm; Reply: 4
Sorry, but your plot goes nowhere. Next time, try making note cards with scenes on each of them and piece it out to see if it all makes sense.
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