Clifford by Chris Ryves (Mr. Dreadful) - Horror - With the help of his older sister, Angela, Clifford Rennes hopes to become the greatest slasher since Michael Meyers and Jason Voorhees. 77 pages - pdf, format 8)

Thanks for putting the script up Don. I messed up on the name though. It's called "Clifford." I must have put my username in the wrong box.

Good job. I like the final twist at the end. The characters are all pretty complex, messed up people. Theres not one nice character in this story, which is strangely refreshing. It would of been nice to know why Clifford killed his parents though, to let us know perhaps why he and Angela are the way they are, perhaps through flashback.
I have little bad to say about this script. If I had to pick one thing maybe the dialogue in a few places. Particuarly the polic officer when hes talking to the kids about Mrs March's death. Seems unrealistic. Aside from that, really enjoyable read and thanks for putting it up.

If you get a chance to read this please critisize the crap out of it cuz I need to know where to make improvements. Later
http://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/dontleavemealone.doc

Thanks for the review. Yeah I want to expand the second draft to add a little meat to the story.

And yeah I"ll give your script a review over the weekend.