The Limb by Kiril Maksimoski - Drama - Troubled teenager is set to fulfill his plans over a course of two days. He's challenged by his gritty past and the odd future along the way. 79 pages - pdf, format 8)

a group of boys are energetically play basketball-PG. 7/ re-word this.
It's caught my attention.  I really like the banter between Victor and David. Good general feel for dialogue. A criticism is that Steve seems a little too stereotypical asshole stepfatherish.  But you got a good grasp on format,