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Posted by: Don, February 12th, 2010, 9:44pm
Another Story of Violence by Teo González - Short - {no logline} 1 page - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: craig cooper-flintstone, February 13th, 2010, 10:10am; Reply: 1
Hey Teo,

Nothing really to report here. It made me smile, but I'd figured out what was going to happen as the sketch seemed sort of familiar (I think it was a joke I heard way back).

Cheers

Craig
Posted by: dogglebe (Guest), February 13th, 2010, 3:37pm; Reply: 2
This is a pretty old joke; I think I saw it in a WC Fields movies... or atleast the Three Stooges.

THe formatting was fine, but the story just wasn't there.


Phil
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