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Posted by: Don, March 26th, 2010, 7:01pm
The Sandwich Days by Matthew Dressel and Phil Vaira & Andrea Walters (Story by Matthew Dressel) - Short, Comedy - Billiam, constantly tormented by a bully and airborne sandwiches, decides to ignore his mother's advice and fight back with the help of his friend,Tim, and 100 sandwiches. - pdf, format 8)

Posted by: screenrider (Guest), March 26th, 2010, 7:27pm; Reply: 1
Great work, Dressel.

Can't wait to see the finished product.
Posted by: rendevous, March 26th, 2010, 8:22pm; Reply: 2
Ah Dressel. I do remember you saying something I was saying earlier about writing a kick ass script. And you said that a long time ago.

Nice to see you getting work done. Keep at it. You'll get there. Closer than most.

R
Posted by: dresseme (Guest), March 31st, 2010, 9:12pm; Reply: 3

Quoted from screenrider
Great work, Dressel.

Can't wait to see the finished product.


Thanks.  I know Phil put a lot of hard work into this, so I'm sure it turned out great.  I actually have yet to see the finished film, but I should be getting my copy within the week.


Quoted from rendevous
Ah Dressel. I do remember you saying something I was saying earlier about writing a kick A** script. And you said that a long time ago.

Nice to see you getting work done. Keep at it. You'll get there. Closer than most.


I actually wrote this script my second year in film school, maybe 4 or 5 years ago.  Phil came on here asking for a family-oriented script, and it was the only one I had.  Granted, I usually write family-friendly stuff, but not usually family-oriented.  Most families like their existentialist Waiting for Godot jokes kept at a minimum, I would think.
Posted by: Sandra Elstree., March 31st, 2010, 9:57pm; Reply: 4

Quoted from dresseme


  Most families like their existentialist Waiting for Godot jokes kept at a minimum, I would think.


I'm only too happy to hear you use:

"Waiting for Godot" without any remorse.  ;D Or is there? Damn there shouldn't be!

Anyways, what happened to Godot?

Sandra

Posted by: harrietb, April 1st, 2010, 5:32am; Reply: 5
Nice to see this has been filmed. I wish the same would happen to my A Friend for George, which also deals with bullying. Well done!
Posted by: Sandra Elstree., April 1st, 2010, 12:36pm; Reply: 6

I always enjoy watching/reading a light hearted piece and this was that. Tee-hee.

You are a good writer and it's a pleasure to read your work.

Sandra
Posted by: irish eyes, April 2nd, 2010, 8:51pm; Reply: 7
You don`t have to put `CUT TO` before every scene, as you have a master scene heading, a director will know to `CUT TO` anyway.
I still enjoyed reading it and all the best with it.
Posted by: rendevous, April 2nd, 2010, 9:00pm; Reply: 8
Ah now Irish. There'd be reasons for that being there with this script. The rest of us are kicking bricks around on building sites. D is actually watching us through the camera on his iPad.

By the way D - read it. You'll get there. Keep at it. No matter wat.

R
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