The Ancient Guardians: The Malum Res by Gina Romano - Sci Fi, Fantasy - In a time of magic and science, Jacobi, an ordinary boy of humble origins, seeks ultimate power and the respect that comes with it. Follow Jacobi along his path to becoming the ultimate evil—the Malum Res. 122 pages - fdr, format 8)

Gina, Click "file" then "save as" then pdf. Then post here. most people can't read the final draft file here.

Then again maybe you shouldn't. Read a coupla of pages... That dialogue is waaay on the nose.