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Posted by: Don, May 12th, 2010, 8:06pm
The Eternal Night by Zach Hennis - Action, Adventure - When a man becomes detached from the society he longs to protect, what will he be capable of doing? 70 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: Forgive, June 26th, 2010, 5:04pm; Reply: 1
Interesting idea.
I felt like there was a lack of background (is it part of a series?)
Some of the formatting was out.
I also felt that some of Red Wolf's dialogue was poor - a bit wooden and comic book-like.
I liked it more as it warmed up, in particular the work with the police - felt a bit more on the nose, and driven.
Simon
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