Dracula by Richard Sharp (based on the work by Bram Stoker) - Drama, Play - Closely following the action of the Bram Stoker novel, Jonathan Harker travels to Transylvania to meet Dracula who, after imprisoning Jonathan travels to London. Jonathan escapes and returns to London where he,Dr Seward and Van Helsing solve the mystery of Lucy's death and Mina's illness and pursue revenge on Dracula. 57 pages - rtf, format 8)

Note: This is a Play

You need to re-submit the play.  A lot of dialogue between Dracula and Harker seems to have disappeared.  Only letters appear at the right side on one of the pages.

I don't think your format is the right one.  I wrote a sci-fi play called Leo and Virgo, and it was different from this one.  I used the New York format.  You might be able to find it on the play section of ss.

I'll read it completely when the dialogue is put back in your second draft.  But you may want to remove some of the dialogue as it seems too wordy to read.

I like the general premise, especially with the Nosferatu being a silent chorus.