Oh dear. I'm following Lc and Led again. People will talk. Ah well, they do that anyway. The only thing worse than being talked about is... er, a red hot poker up the jucksy? I forget.
Title always means a lot. Hence my presence. And it's not even Christmas. Well, not yet.
Er, oh yeah, the script. I knew I was typing for some proper reason.
Trust me no-one cares what draft it is. And if they do don't tell them. Well, you can but not on the title page. I learned that one the hard way.
Woah, SA. Do you know Blomkamp? Ah shucks. Worth a try. The world is finally smiling on your place. 'Bout bloody time too. Everyone needs a little help.
Now when. Oh yeah. Pardon me, I do like to drag me reviews out. Just like the corpses on a Staurday morning, Er, I'm using metaphor. Oh dear.
L & L were right on a lot of points. You got summat going on here. When it started I thought "Oh". After a few lines I thought "Ahh". You got something. As I said earlier, the world is smiling on your place. Now Peter has put Neill on the map the film indiustry is looking hard at your country.
This was frighteningly good -
Quoted from TS, WSA Gunshots ring outside, the pair ignore them. |
One of the best lines I've read in months. It tells us everything we need to know about locale, situation and attitude. Sir, I salute thee.
I'm gonna read the rest later. If you wanna know more PM me.
I think the previous posters' advices summed up most of it.
Keep it going fella.
R xo