Mob Scoop by Joey B - Short, Comedy - Sam is a young, aspiring big-city newspaper reporter. When he realizes his grandfather has a serendipitous inside connection, he sees his opportunity to go big.  20 pages - pdf, format 8)

Not sure all those End Of Acts help anyone. A new heading would do. Same with the parentheticals. Especially the really long ones.

Very heavy on dialogue. While some of it's good some of it ain't. Needs trimming way back. Even David Mamet stuff ain't this dialogue loaded.

Anyway. Had a few moments.

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