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Posted by: Don, October 5th, 2010, 6:10pm
The Cherry Vine by Darren J Seeley - Action, Adventure - The mob wants him dead; the feds want him alive. They both have to wait in line. 118 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: screenrider (Guest), October 6th, 2010, 12:47am; Reply: 1
Darren,
This is gonna be a strange review, but I just wanted to acknowledge that I read this. Around page 40 I found myself skimming, partly because I wanted to get to the end and see what happens to Colin Cherry, and partly because I was beginning to feel overwhelmed with all the characters. That was a mistake because it threw off the flow. I'm gonna have to reread it another day when I've got more time and patience.
One thing's for sure, you've got a confident and unique voice. It deserves a second look. Kind of reminded me of Smokin' Aces and Shades Within.
PS - Check for typos. I spotted a few.
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