Finding Peace by Paul Juliff - Action, Adventure, Love Story, Drugs, Gangs, Inpirational - Finding peace is a story of one mans fight to find peace.His evil past comes back to haunt him and in order to live in peace he must fight back to protect his loved ones.  118 pages - pdf, format 8)

Dialogue isn't capitalised.

Made it to about page 10.  

Punctuation is your friend.  

It's not something teachers talk about just to annoy you.  Of course, we know all the cool kids are busy texting away at each other and they NEVER use punctuation and their meaning is totally clear.  

But your lack of punctuation is a more phobic variety indeed.

Almost rebellious.

As if you are trying to say, "Hey world!  My script rocks so hard I don't even need the basics!"

Trust me...you need the basics.  They are the table your fantastic little house of cards is built on.

Later.

When did drugs become a genre?