The Unseen (Barbosa) by Ray Barbosa - Short, Supernatural - He's been given the key to the material world and the spiritual realm. But, more importantly been chosen by incomprehensible forces to help bring down the evil   that plagues our world today.  10 pages - pdf, format 8)

In a commanding voice - what the hell was that? Seriously? What was with the title cards? Was this tongue in cheek or meant to be taken seriously? Why did it end so abruptly? And lastly, did you consume drugs or no brand drain cleaner when you wrote this?

Everytime I see this title on the list I think of what the evening news Hollywood critic would say:

Newscaster:  Let's get over to Rodney for a look at this weekend's movies.  Rodney, what've you got for us?

Rodney:  Make sure, "The Unseen" is unseen.  Now here's Tony with the weather...

No one's having a very good day in this script are they.  ;)

I think Mr. Detective 2 is right:

>DETECTIVE 2 Drop the axe. Don’t let this get
any uglier than it already has.  ;D

Keep on keeping on.

Sandra