Live Life by Talent - Action, Crime - Three high school drop outs, CAESAR, CYRIL and SANDILE engage in criminal activities to attain the fancy life they want, they find peace in trouble and at on time law stands tall when they mess with a deadly detective DION. 98 pages - pdf, format 8)

Man, I am no expert on log lines, but...

run on sentence, spelling mistakes, and...

just redo it, or people will be afraid to dig into your script. You have done a lot of work, 98 pages, and you wouldn't want  to scare people before it has a chance.

yep, there mistakes and most probably you were the first person to read the script, I did hand it out for people's opinions but thanks you're helping.