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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board / Action/Adventure Scripts / Lionman
Posted by: Don, May 10th, 2011, 8:08pm
Lionman by Sarmad Moosa - Action, Adventure - An incident gave him extra power in anger & wound converts him in to a Lion Man. 98 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: nemo, June 6th, 2011, 7:02am; Reply: 1
Hey man, good attempt.
You need a lot of work, english isn't your first language so the sentences are confusing.
at least you had the formatting right.
keep it up.
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